Five sentence fiction: Dazzles
Shama and Yusuf were a happy couple, they had everything going for them, they had a beautiful house,adorable parents, good jobs, only thing missing in their life was a child, who could fill the quiet house with laughter.
Shama was aware her in-laws wanted a grand kid, they were impatient, they thought the only way to solve this problem, was their son should marry again, Yusuf disliked the idea, he told his parents, he was not interested.
The young couple decided to consult a physician, the physician gave them hope, within a year Shama gave birth to a beautiful baby girl,they named her Asha, soon their little baby was ready for school, she did remarkably well in school in the first year, parents were happy, the teachers told them she had incredible memory.
The following years were awesome for the couple, Asha finished school successfully, she was ready for college, in college she wowed her profs, it was the first time they had someone so outstanding in their class, they were proud of her and wished her well.
After completing her education, she applied for a job, the interviewer was a young man, who did not give much credit to women, Asha stepped in his office and sat down, the young man was sure she wouldn’t be able to withstand the barrage of questions he would ask, her knowledge not only changed his impression of women, he was dazzled by the way Asha answered the questions!
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Dear Ranu,
Thank you for this post about Asha. I am dazzled by her!
All good wishes,
robert
You are dazzled too? it’s getting to be a chore to write stories,
and only five sentences is not easy.
I like Asha. I hope she keeps relying on her dazzling intelligence rather than wasting her time being dazzled by young men with pretty faces and no substance.
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Ranu, how nicely you’ve put the entire story in 5 sentences. Yes it’s true men like to believe in stereotypes and feel women can’t do all that men can. Loved your story.
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thank you Tina.
nice story! i like the ending, when Asha proves girls are no less !!
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Thank you so much for your visit.
Always against the odds. Quite the long sentences there as well.
Thank you Cammie.