Five sentence fiction: Luminous
She was down in the dumps after her father died, she felt she was surrounded by darkness.
Her friends came to console her, she sent them away, one by one all her friends left her, she didn’t care, she was unhappy and didn’t think anyone or anything could make her happy.
Then one day she saw a bright light coming towards her, it startled her, she attempted to run away, the light kept coming towards her,”go away she cried, leave me alone!”
To her dismay she saw the light changing into a human form, a gorgeous woman, who smiled and said, “I know what’s troubling you my dear child, you cannot spend your youth crying for someone who is gone, by doing so you’re making your father unhappy too, you have to learn to let it go, come with me I’ll show you the way to happiness.”
Realizing it was her only chance to be happy she followed the woman who at once transformed into a bright light and led her to the path of happiness!
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Dear Ranu,
Thank you for this most inspiring post. We never walk alone!
All good wishes,
robert
Thank you Robert for continuing to inspire me.I appreciate your friendship.
Nice one. A light is always there to show us the path. All we have to do is to look up.
Thank you Dusky,great to know you and read your comment.
This is the best kind of illumination!
Thank you Brenda, nice to meet you.
Tough times and the light of hope and happiness. Good one! 🙂
Thank you Shanxat.
May we all find the light which leads to happiness.. Nicely done Ranu!!
Thank you Vinitha, nice to know you.