365 Writing Prompts:Moment of clarity

Tell us about a time you’ve been trying to solve a knotty problem, a life problem, a big problem— and you had a moment of clarity when the solution appeared to you, as though you were struck by lightning.

One year I went to Toronto to see my cousin, one of my college friend found out I was in Toronto,she came to visit me in my cousin’s apartment. We had a nice visit it was fun talking about our college days.

Next day she called me and said she’d be coming to take me to her house, she lived in the suburbs.

Marcia wanted me to see her house, it was a two storied house, I noticed she was describing her house as if I was a buyer. I looked around the thought of buying her house did not strike me. I quietly listened to her and when it was time to leave I thanked Marcia and her husband for being so nice.

Next day Marcia called me again to visit her, I excused myself because I was leaving the next day.

I called her from my home, her husband answered the phone and told me his wife was too sick to answer the phone, I didn’t think anything and felt she is sick, maybe she’ll call me back when she’s better. When Marcia failed to call me and also did not send me a Christmas card,I thought about her house, how eager she was to show me her backyard, the bedrooms in the house, she also told me how good the neighbors were. Something clicked in my brain,maybe her intention was to sell the house to me, because I stayed quiet she suspected I won’t  buy her house.

It became clear Marcia’s eagerness to have me in her house was to somehow impress me to buy her house, when it didn’t happen, it was no longer useful to maintain her friendship with me!

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4 thoughts on “365 Writing Prompts:Moment of clarity

  1. Dear Ranu,

    Thank you for sharing this moment of clarity. It is unusual how our minds suddenly figure out or discover something.

    All good wishes,

    robert

  2. Yes, I agree that sometimes our minds suddenly figure out reality and it can be a terrible experience when it involves the discovery of some pretense, as in this case. As they say, honesty is the best policy – it keeps things simple.

    • It was my husband’s fault whenever he met someone living in Toronto he’d ask them to look for a house,
      I knew he would not buy one, he loved New Found Land too much to leave it.

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