Five sentence fiction: Fresh

Lillie McFerrin Writes

It was a fabulous morning, not a cloud in the sky,everywhere she turned she saw beautiful green shrubs and grass, the flowers were in full bloom, showing their assortment of colors, how could she Nina stay inside the house, she dressed up in her gorgeous blue satin dress, but as she was about to step outside the door, she thought of her friend Penny, I must give her a call she thought.

She went back and called Penny, Penny was busy reading her newest novel, She answered the call and found Nina at the other end inviting her to go for a walk, her immediate reaction was to refuse, but she couldn’t, Nina was always a  good friend, she did not like disappointing her. She got ready and headed over to Nina’s house, she found Nina all dressed up, “What’s the occasion,” she exclaimed !

“Nothing silly, I got this new dress yesterday and wanted to wear it, besides it’s a lovely day, everything looks so gorgeous, do you like my dress she asked?

“Yes, I love it, you look beautiful,Nina!

They had not gone too far when suddenly a raven perched on the light post above, cawed and then the worst thing happened, it’s dropping fell right on Nina’s head and her dress, it was awful, she ran back to her house and started weeping!

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14 thoughts on “Five sentence fiction: Fresh

    • I don’t know why when I saw the prompt,all I could think were three things,raven, dropping and dress.
      Isn’t it awful, but I wrote it thinking it will bring some laughter in the new year,since it’s a
      fiction no one gets hurt.What do you think? Happy New Year and welcome to my blog, thanks for visiting
      and leaving your comment.

  1. I’ve been in this situation quite a few times. By the amount of people who told me it brings luck I’m surprised I haven’t sprouted any four leaf clovers. Can’t believe the coincidence of this post 😮
    Btw thanks for the lovely comment

    • Thank you, when i read the prompt, there were three things that flashed in my brain, the raven,dropping and dress.
      So I wrote the story. In our country this kind of mishap happens quite frequently!

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