Five Sentence Fiction: Fresh
The cold crisp sunny morning was a blessing after days of continuous rain, Patricia called her cousin Tracy, to find out if she’d be interested to go for a walk,Tracy was thrilled by this offer, Tracy met Pat at her house.
Both looked as fresh as a daisy, the weather makes such a difference to everyone’s mood, they decided to walk to the strip mall nearby, there wasn’t much happening inside, the sun shining after so many days must be the reason, there were fewer people inside.
Pat and Tracy grabbed a cup of coffee and sat down in a corner of the coffee shop, they were so deep in conversation they failed to notice Tracy’s friend Mark, who had come to get a cup of coffee and sit outdoors on a bench, when he saw Tracy, he came to say Hi, but did not like to disturb them, besides he didn’t know the girl with Tracy and turned around to leave.
He was about to open the door to go out when he heard Tracy, “Mark” she called, “come here and meet my cousin Patricia”.
Mark came back, after the introduction, Mark sat down, he told Tracy he was offered a job at a posh restaurant to play the piano, it was a decent job so Mark was happy to take it, Patricia who had no idea what Mark did for a living could not stay quiet any longer, “Are you a pianist too, she exclaimed?”
Thank you for this post. We like it, as it shows how life can open up in so many directions, some known beforehand, others not.
All good wishes,
I like your Philosophical approach.Thank you. 🙂
Dear Robert,I do agree with you. Sometimes life is cruel, sometimes it’s good. I’m probably seeing the cruel side of life. It’s okay, it had to come sometimes!
Words were just so lively I could see the happenings while reading it. Beautifully narrated. There’s such an amazing flow in the story and the end was lovely too 🙂
Thank you so much Sushree. 🙂