Five sentence fiction: Flames
It was a beautiful morning, Mrs Hardy was baking muffins for Sandy’s classroom party, they were chocolate chip muffins, they’d be done in another five minutes, Mrs. Hardy told herself, suddenly she recalled her mother’s muffins they were so delicious, she and Mom would eat the fresh muffins when they came out of the oven.
The thought of her mother and the muffins made Mrs. Hardy eager to send some for her mother who lived close by.
As soon as Sandy smelled the muffins she came running to taste one, her mother told her about grandma and how tasty her baked muffins were when she was little, immediately Sandy said , “Can I take some for her, Mom?”
Mrs. Hardy was very pleased her daughter mentioned before she did, she said, “It will be so nice and your grandma would love it.”
Sandy packed a small basket of muffins for her grandma, as she was walking along, she smelled smoke and noticed a fire truck speeding along the road, further up the street there were ย flames rising up from a house, she wasn’t quite sure who owned the house, she walked a few more steps when someone stopped her, ย Sandy looked close, “it’s my grandma’s house, she said I have to save her” her last words were barely audible as she fell and fainted!
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Dear Ranu,
You’re a gifted writer. Thank you for sharing this short story with us.
All good wishes,
robert
Dear Robert,
Thank you so much for your comment. ๐
The story went really fine…though at the end it was sad.
Thank you Sushree. ๐
My dearest sister,
Yes the end was unexpected :). And very touching ๐ฆ
Thank you my dearest brother for your comment. ๐
That was sad story, sis! I can’t imagine if it was real, Alhamdulillah it was fiction!
Sorry dear sister,it is a lesson of life, happiness can change to sadness in the wink of an eye. ๐ฆ
Yes, that’s true, sister!
Thank you Fatma. ๐
Oh dear it started out so sweet and a turn for the worse, thanks for an enjoyable read!
Thank you Mandy.