writing 201: Poetry, Day 6: Faces, Found Poetry,Chiasmus
Today’s form: found poetry
Today’s device: Chiasmus
Theme: Faces
Our Prophet said, “do not live to eat;
It is better if you eat to live.”
It not only makes you healthy,
It saves humanity from hunger.
Sharing food gives us dividends,
Our name is entered,
In the book of good deeds!
When we see hungry faces,
It’s our duty to wipe off those traces.
We were meant to help each other,
So we can live peacefully together!!
This is beautiful!! Something we all should do!!
And found poetry and chiasmus in two lines…well done! :0
Dear Sabah,
Thank you so much for your comment. š
Dear Ranu,
Thank you for this. So many valuable truths are in this poetic creation!
All good wishes,
robert
Dear Robert,
Thank you so much for your valuable comment. š
My dearest sister,
Thanks for the trouble which you must have gone through in order to present this. It has refreshed the concept of chiasmus in my mind, which I had forgotten. Plus the thoughts which you have shared and how you shared them is a treat. š
My dearest brother,
Someone today wrote a comment that I should appreciate every comment I receive, I replied I treasure each and every comment I receive.
You are my brother your comments always makes me happy, that you found the time out of your busy writing to read my post and write, is beyond my expectation you always write your comment regardless of what it is I write. Thank you so much. š
It’s always a pleasure to read your posts. They are very refreshing š
Thank you my dearest brother. š
Ranu, all your posts are so deep in meaning. Great work. I have nominated you for One Lovely Blog Award. Here’s the link https://mescalime.wordpress.com/2015/10/13/blogger-award-here-it-comes/
Thank you so much for the award and the wonderful comment, Dear Mescalime, my very best wishes to you. š
The rhymes work into the wisdom of the poem, giving us a device for remembrance. Shows craft, creates inspiration. Thank you!
Thank you so much for your comment. š
I agree we should always do what we can for those who are the least
Dear Leslie,
Thank you. š