writing: Intro to Poetry, Day Five: Imperfect

Poetry,Day Five: Imperfect

Poetic Form: Limerick

An old window frame with peeling paint

This was once a window shiny and bright

Neglect is the reason  it doesn’t look right

It needed some  care

But no one was there

Now  it seems better to remove it from  sight!

……………………………..: (

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6 thoughts on “writing: Intro to Poetry, Day Five: Imperfect

  1. I really LOVED the rhyming, dearest sister :). (Correction to my previous comment, I missed out the word “loved”, the new keyboard I am using is a bit too light).

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