Writing, Intro to Poetry, Day Five: Imperfect

Poetry, Day Five:Imperfect

Poetic form: Limerick

#Introtopoetry, day five

An old window frame with peeling paint

There was a time this window frame was perfect,

Man’s neglect and harsh weather made it imperfect,

Reminds me of man,

When he’s old and tan,

His frame  like the window will  also be imperfect!

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4 thoughts on “Writing, Intro to Poetry, Day Five: Imperfect

  1. Dear Ranu,

    Thank you for sharing with us this well rhymed poem about this aged window which, like aged humans, has a special beauty to it.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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