Week Four, limerick challenge: Mist
Limerick Challenge: Mist
The boat headed gingerly into the gloom
Threatening clouds hung heavy with doom
“Take heart!” said the Captain,
“Y’all in the cabin –
the fog will lift, fear not a watery tomb!” 🙂
Second Place
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I loved the line ‘fear not a watery tomb’. :).
Adhi thank you for reading and writing your comment. 🙂
Your limerick has a haunting, antique touch. Thank you!
Thank you for your comment clcouch. 🙂
Dear Ranu,
What an absolutely wonderful poem!
I like a lot the spirit of this poem, and may use this as a meditatively inspiring verse: “;Take heart!’ said the Captain.”
All good wishes,
robert
Dear Robert,
Thank you so much for your comment. 🙂
Dear Robert,
Thank you for the beautiful comment. 🙂
Lovely Limerick. I’m imagining captain Jack Sparrow again now.
Thank you Nicola.:)
Thank you Nicola.
Beautiful Ranu! Very vivid 🙂
Thank you Mescalime. 🙂
CONGRATULATIONs for the seccond place ranu. There’s so much of depth in your limerick
Dear Sudha,
Thank you so much. 🙂
U R WELCOME ranu
🙂
My dearest sister,
What a lovely, ironic limerick – and many congratulations for the second place! 🙂
My dearest brother,
A big thank you to you. 🙂
Excellent . Congrats for second place dear.
Dear Indira,
Thank you so much. 🙂